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SUGGESTIONS FOR WRITING THE GWPE< GWPE < ENGLISH < CAHSS < HSU
Suggestions for writing the GWPE

The essay booklet distributed at the examination contains the following directions:

The examination consists of two essays, one on each of the questions that will be handed to you by the examination supervisor. For each question you will have 45 minutes to plan and write your essay. Write only on the assigned topic. An essay on a topic of your choice is not acceptable.

This examination is your opportunity to demonstrate that you can write effectively. You should therefore take care to express your thoughts on each topic clearly and exactly. Be specific, using supporting examples whenever appropriate. Remember that how well you write is much more important than how much you write.

You are to write your essays in this booklet. You should, of course, write neatly and legibly. To be certain that you have enough space for both essays, do not skip lines, write in excessively large letters, or leave wide margins. You may use the top of page 2 of the booklet for any notes you wish to make before you begin writing.

Turn the page and, when your supervisor directs you to do so, begin work on Question 1. Stop work on Question 1 when your supervisor directs you to do so. Then follow the same procedure for Question 2.

Except as length reflects full development, the length of your essay is not important, but it is important that you complete your essay. It is thus essential that you plan your response so that you can finish your essays in the allotted time. In order to use your time most efficiently, keep the following points in mind:

1. Read the topic two or more times before writing. Circle key words to help you focus on the assigned task. (See below for definitions of some key words commonly used in essay questions.)

2. Take a few minutes to think and organize your thoughts before you begin writing. Jot
down your ideas (there is sufficient note space in the examination booklet), but avoid making long
outlines which will rob you of writing time.

3. Don't let spelling slow down your writing. Keep the flow of your writing going and
correct spelling errors when proofreading.

4. Leave a few minutes at the end to proofread your essay. Don't try to make extensive changes at this time, but correct grammatical and spelling errors and other minor flaws.

5. Do not attempt to recopy your essay for the sake of neatness. If your essay is legible, don't be concerned about the appearance of crossouts and corrections.

 

IMPORTANT TERMS USED IN ESSAY QUESTIONS

The following terms commonly occur in essay topics. Since you are required to write on the assigned topic, it is essential that you understand the meaning of these key terms:

Analyze: Separate the assertion, statement, idea, etc., into its component parts in order to understand and explain their relationships.

Argue (or Present a Point of View): Take only one point of view (either Pro or con) and substantiate that position. Don't be concerned about taking the "right" or "wrong" position. Just be sure that whichever position you take is soundly and clearly supported.

Comment: Express a personal reaction or opinion.

Compare: Set up a comparison between items, focusing on their similarities.

Contrast: Set up a comparison between items, focusing on their differences.

Describe: Use adjectives, adverbs, and descriptive phrases to create a mental picture for your reader.

Evaluate: Examine something--an assertion, statement, idea, etc.--to determine its worth and judge its value.

Explain: Provide reasons substantiating an opinion or strengthening an argument. Answer the question "why?"


SCORING STANDARDS

Essays are judged on a number of factors--e.g., insight into and understanding of the question, organization, development, adequacy and quality of supporting detail, grammar, mechanics, and so on. Essays are scored on their overall quality, but an extremely well-written response may be scored a point higher than it would be on the basis of content alone, while a poorly-written response may be scored a point lower. The following statement of standards for the numerical scores may be taken as representative.

Possible Scores

6 An essay receiving a score of Six will:

Address all aspects of the question.
Show a good understanding of and insight into the concerns of the question.
Be clearly organized.
Be well developed.
Contain good supporting detail.

An essay receiving a score of six will show a high degree of competence generally, though it may have small imperfections or minor errors in mechanics.


5-4 An essay in the Five to Four score range will be generally competent but will:

Slight a part of the question.
Have somewhat unclear organization.
Have uneven development.
Be somewhat thin in supporting detail.
Contain minor mechanical errors.

The distinction between a score of Five and a score of Four will be determined by the extent and seriousness of the above weaknesses.

3 An essay receiving a score of Three will:

Omit one part of the question or treat the parts of the question superficially.
Drift away from the topic or display considerable irrelevancy.
Lack supporting detail.
Exhibit significant difficulties with organization.
Contain frequent grammatical or mechanical errors.

2: An essay receiving a score of Two will:

Be thin or superficial in content.
Largely ignore the question or treat it very poorly.
Display serious weaknesses in organization.
Lack development.
Have major faults in diction, grammar, and mechanics.

1: A score of One is used for essays which show little or no understanding of the question or indicate incompetence in structure, syntax, and diction.

0: A score of Zero is used for non-response essays and essays that are completely off the topic.

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