The Collapsing Castle: First Impressions

Oxford 1998 Program Participants Talk About The Collapsing Castle

Chris Melanie


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by Chris

The first thing that struck me about this story was the obvious supernatural overtones presented in the book's opening passage. The presence that appears to Eppie, in my opinion, is demonic. Clues from her actions indicate that this is not the first time she has seen the figure.

The supernatural overtones (or undertones) remained as the book progressed, but I became confused as to what exactly was supernatural in nature and what was psychological. Were the manifestations (I don't want to give them away) purely a result of a guilt-ridden conscience, or was there really something "other-worldly" occuring here?

That aside, I was really drawn into the story of a man who took his life for granted. Here he is- young, intelligent, respected- has a succesful wife and a loving daughter. His intentions stray as he becomes infatuated by one of his students (I don't want to just summarize here, and once again- I don't want to give away and twists). What amazes me is the main character's ignorance of what is happening around him. Middleton throws a few clues in throghout the book that could lead the reader to make the story's major discovery before the main character does. I will admit that I didn't catch on until after the secret was revealed.

In the interview that will soon be posted on the web page, Middleton discusses his initial dislike of the story, but then goes on to explain how "rehabilitated" the story in his own mind after drawing connections between it and his personal life. He didn't elaborate much on this, but after reading the story, I think anyone can see how the idea of a collapsing castle can in some way relate to their own life.

In the end, many of my questions were still unanswered about the use of the superatural. I am excited to hear some other responses.



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by Melanie


This is the second Haydn Middleton book I have read, so when I began this book, it was with some hesitations. I wasn't sure whether The Lie of the Land was just a bit eccentric, or if Middleton always writes in such a twisted fashion. Well, I find that The Collapsing Castle has just as many twists and oddities in its plot as LOL does. And I am even beginning to enjoy this about Middleton's work!

I am not at all familiar with the myths and legends that Middleton writes on in CC, so I did have some troubles following the book at times. I wonder if natives of Britain are more familiar with the myths that he writes on, and so understand his novels with more ease, or if they have difficulty in following, also. I feel that my having to read closer to follow the novel helped me to be in the story more than usual, because I was reading with such care. I think that may be why I figured out what the big "secret" was, where Chris did not! When Middleton finally revealed what the "secret" was, my mom thought I was nuts, because I jumped up and down, book in hand, and chanted "I KNEW IT, I KNEW IT," over and over.

I enjoyed this book more so than LOL, I think because I could identify with many of Daniel's feelings. It seems that CC deals with more real, and dare I say normal, people. The characters in CC go through problems that many marriages stray into, and because the situations seemed so viable, I really got in touch with this book, where as the situations in LOL were foreign to me, and I had to make myself continue.

I was somewhat disappointed with the ending of the book. As the "lightning storm" scene is occuring, I found myself reading faster and faster, expecting an equally exciting end, but it just wasn't there. I would suggest this book to someone, definately over LOL. I was more excited with CC, and it seemed to be a smoother reading book than LOL.



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