Your Handy Guide to Diagnosing Meter and Rhythm: This
is a technique that has proved effective for me in scanning verse; you
may have developed your own, or may develop your own in the future,
but in the meantime, this may help you to approach the sticky job of determining
meter and rhythm.
Note that the meter of a poem and its rhythm are not the same thing.
Meter refers to a pre-existing, "ideal" rhythm; virtually every poem you'll
read will deviate from that rhythm at points. Your job is then to
figure out how the poem's meaning is served by that deviation.
1. First, read the poem once to determine if traditional meter and rhythm
should even be considered. If you’re dealing with free verse (as
opposed to blank verse, remember), skip ahead to number 6.
2. If you sense the poet is working with a regular metrical
pattern, check immediately to see if the poem obviously conforms to one
of the traditional verse forms—it may be a sonnet or villanelle, for instance,
or written in ballad stanzas or heroic couplets. Of course, determining
the meter is part of identifying these traditional forms, but you’re probably
safe in predicting that a fourteen line poem with 10 syllables in each
line and a regular pattern of rhyme will turn out to be a sonnet.
3. If the poem does seem to scan regularly, but isn’t any traditional
verse form you recognize, read several lines, even several stanzas again
to determine if it’s primarily a two-beat or a three-beat rhythm.
That is to say, does the meter have the tick-tock quality of a metronome,
or more of a galloping quality when you exaggerate the meter somewhat?
(Note also that three-beat meters generally “feel” faster because of the
succession of unstressed syllables.) It helps to pause at the end
of lines, even run-on lines; it also helps to ignore the actual sense of
the words and exaggerate the sing-song quality of the rhythm. It
might even help to tap out the rhythm with your hand or your foot--this
is very much like determining rhythm in music, after all. Most poems
in English are of the two-beat variety, but you should always read carefully,
rather than jump to conclusions.
4. Once you’ve determined if the meter is a two-beat or a three-beat
meter, decide whether a two-beat meter is primarily iambic
or trochaic, or whether a three-beat rhythm is primarily anapestic
or dactylic—that is, ask yourself where the (relative) stresses fall (remembering,
again, that very few poems are completely consistent throughout).
It may help to keep a line of each in your head for comparison:
iambic meter: The GRAVE'S a FINE and
PRIvate PLACE
But NONE I THINK do THERE emBRACE
trochaic meter: HERE lies RESTing, OUT of
BREATH
OUT of TURNS, ELIZaBETH
anapestic meter: For the ANgel of DEATH
spread his WINGS on the BLAST
And BREATHED in the FACE of the FOE as he PASSED
dactylic meter: WIT with his WANtonness
TASTeth death's BITterness
A few more hints: feet that end on a stressed syllable are sometimes referred
to as “rising feet,” and, not surprisingly, feet that end on an unstressed
syllable, “falling feet.” You can sense the distinction in the lines
above (I think, anyway). And the three-beat meters are often used
in light verse--the anapest in the limerick and the dactyl in the double
dactyl, for instance--though they’re also employed for serious verse.
5. Once you’ve determined the metrical pattern, the real fun begins:
recognizing where and how the poem’s own rhythm deviates from the underlying
meter, and to what effect. THIS IS NOT AN EXACT SCIENCE—even if some
instructors think it is. There are many disagreements over how to
scan specific lines. Try exaggerating the presumed meter as you read,
noting the places where it seems to distort the natural inflections of
spoken English. “On First Looking into Chapman’s Homer” is a sonnet,
which means it should be iambic pentameter, but try exaggerating the meter
as you read the first line:
Much HAVE I TRAVeled IN
the REALMS of GOLD.
That sounds okay, except that stressing “have” more than “much” sounds
strained; in ordinary speech, you’d emphasize “much” rather than the auxiliary
verb. So you’d probably want to scan
the line
MUCH have I TRAVeled in
the REALMS of GOLD.
(The power of the meter will probably contribute a slight stress to the
normally unstressed preposition “in,” but probably not as much as more
important words, like “realms” or “gold.”) The next question is,
what does this deviation from the prescribed meter do to our experience
of the poem? And for that, you have to consider the line in the larger
context of the poem as a whole.
Words of single syllables are often hardest to figure out, relative
to the other words in the line, but words of two or more syllables have
natural inflections that should take precedence over the underlying meter.
So “silent,” in the final line of the Keats's sonnet, doesn’t become siLENT;
you ascribe to it its proper inflection, SIlent, but against the
background expectation of the iambic foot.
6. If you’ve identifed the poem as an example of free verse, scanning
is an even thornier issue; some critics contend that all good free verse
plays with conventional meter, even if only to disrupt it. This is
certainly true of some free verse (many of T.S. Eliot’s works, for instance).
In other cases, however, free verse really is just that, and you may find
so many exceptions and deviations that relating the poem to any standard
meter will seem extremely dubious. Do listen for the echoes of standard
meters as you read a free verse poem, but recognize that you may be looking
for something that’s not there; you may be better off considering line
length, or the lines’ relation to conversational language, or some other
rhythmic principle. Sometimes patterns of rhyme, including near-rhymes
like assonance and consonance, will influence the rhythm of a poem in free
verse, as in Swenson's "Riding the 'A,'" where internal rhymes and near-rhymes
contribute to the speed of particular lines. There are also rhythmic
patterns that may seem initially like free verse but which do follow a
prescribed pattern; the easiest of these to spot is syllabic verse, where
the poet has counted syllables with no regard to stress. For instance,
every line of the poem may contain, say, 12 syllables, or the number of
syllables in each line may be consistent from stanza to stanza (such as
a poem of three-line stanzas where the first line of each stanza has five
syllables, the second line seven, and the third line nine).
A related approach is sprung rhythm, where only the stressed syllables
count; in sprung rhythm, you might have a seven-syllable line and
a ten-syllable line, but the lines will be consistent in having five stressed
syllables. This is a very old approach to poetic rhythm in English,
going all the way back to Anglo-Saxon verse, but it’s notoriously difficult
to scan; in fact, Gerard Manley Hopkins, who coined the phrase “sprung
rhythm,” often used accent marks to indicate where the stresses should
fall.